Rodney & The Vampire

Rodney & The Vampire

Tam & Cam

Tam & Cam

Feedback

below is different feedback we got

Feedback 1

- Good genre - used comedy
- Look at film 'Demon headmaster'
- add bits over the summer, but not random things - remember logical causalty
- Need to create a good back story for Rodney
- look at moc-horror effects
- look at headline of teacher trying to kill student
- use different influences (magazines, songs, tv, newspaper etc)
- use self reference
- good ending - not a predictable plot twist
- themes are not typical
- remember thematic unity
- class full of cast - may find problems with this


feedback for editing

- a bit too prolonged
- try and make the boys walking towards him shorter
- add a few more cutaways
- have the voice over the shot
- scene 3 starts too soon
- pan in scene 3 is too long
- lose shot 43
- only show his shoe going into basket
- cut the pan in scene 3 down to when Rodney screams - then cut
- cut down on effects

Feedback on film

- titles are good
- had a bad actor
- Rodney made the film look bad
- the film was good
- portrayed comedy
- film didn't finish properly, could have finished better
- strong title sequence
- continuity problems
- if Rodney was shouting outside he would have been heard by the teachers


the first music we used in our film was not liked according to our feedback so we got different music

feedback on music

- music is too dramatic
- you should use more dramatic music
- music just stops dramatically
- music doesn't go with the action on screen