Feedback on Storyboard
- we must show the relationship between Rodney and Danny before we get to the field
- the glass shots might not be effective but film it anyway
- keep Rodney’s childish behaviour throughout (constant)
- from shot 21 Rodney should still be moaning then you cut to the group with some kind of smug look on there faces as if they have planned something, then you see them grab him
- we should show the sandpit
- take pictures before and after the use of the sandpit
- have cutaway shots from sandpit to teachers in class then we see Rodney walk along
- have shots of teachers before Rodney comes along
- it doesn’t happen when Rodney comes but while he’s on the way and then as he comes we hear a certain part
- input lots of action – reaction
- is Rodney acting superhero like out of character
- add to Rodney’s character every time they discourage him, he should have some kind of reaction suggesting he doesn’t need them
- shot 32 has to be ended very well (show the new Rodney more in 32)
- show Rodney as trying to protect the class with his carrot stake and garlic chain ( reassuring them he will take care of it and deal with Mr Vamping)
- when Rodney walks in there should be more action – reaction of the class and Danny
- the friends could start to insult him
- shot so Danny can insult him one final time
- black out until Rodney is packing up
- we should hear the teacher starting and ending the lessons
